Passing the Lonely Night

(Lyric Contest Entry)


I pretended to be sleeping, ....  through long hours of the night
I could hear your quiet breathing, .... in the early morning light
Empty words we never said,  just the rustle of the bed
I pretended to be sleeping, and hushed my silent weeping
Knowing you were close, beside me,...pretending something, too

Our nights come dark and lonely, 
Nights cold as two hearts grieving
Exhausted love, that cannot sleep
A worn out love that we can't keep
A love that's running out of breath
Is brushing death too soon...

I pretended to be sleeping, but could hear our two hearts beating....
I lie awake with anxious waiting...just to hear your footsteps leaving
A branch against the window glass, is scratching to come in
As if to pry,........the words, "goodbye",..........still waiting to begin....
A love that's running out of air...is breathless in the wind

I pretended to be sleeping, I hear the small clock ticking
The hour hand has swung around, a new day lost before it's found
It has gone too far to turn around
A love that's running out of breath
Is coming to an end.....

I pretended to be sleeping
But, I can't ignore the sunrise
The day arrives, without disguise
I must face it now, and ask it why?
You turn your back, as if to hide
Pretending something too....



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A   Avatar
April 16, 2016 at 10:56 PM
Carrie. Congrats on your great win.... LINDA
Smith Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 1:56 PM
Congratulations Carrie, a deserving win...
A  Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 12:55 PM
Carrie, Congrats on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest **SKAT**
Brown Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 11:57 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Paula's "Passages" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 6:42 PM
What a good song! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Rozario Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 10:48 AM
Congrats Carrie...enjoyed your lyric!!!
Horne Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 12:35 PM
beautiful piece indeed, Carrie. Many congrats on your wins : )
Dietrich Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 10:24 PM
Well, you wowed me as usual. And I am sure this will wow paula. VERY good stuff, CArrie!!
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