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Passing Ships and Fools

Passing Ships and Fools

When you define yourself
and bare all to see,
the truth revealed
is that they’ll see a fool.

When I was young,
they said I was foolish,
and now that I’m old,
they say I’m a fool!
“No fool like an old fool,” they say,
“clinging to the past!”

When we were young
and tussled in the grass,
some cried uncle, some didn’t;
most of us wavered.

With age, you’d think
we’d learn and get smarter,
but instead, we got dumber.
“If only” woke up
and walked out the door;
chalk it up to experience.

In my youth, I was a sailor
who sailed the seas.
Today, I make merry
and tell stories.
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De Beaulieu Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 3:54 PM
Hello Denis, It is good to see you. I hope you and family had a good Christmas. A very interesting poem. Happy New Year. My friend ,/Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 1, 2026 at 10:50 AM
Hello Dennis, Oh you are very welcome. Happy New Year. all the best for the new year. My frind. /Darlene/
Spilchuk Avatar
December 31, 2025 at 7:19 AM
Thank you for commenting. Have a Happy New Year too.
Delegans Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 9:12 AM
Great thoughts and unique perspective, Dennis. Enjoyed your thought provoking poem.
Spilchuk Avatar
December 31, 2025 at 7:24 AM
Your comment and analysis is sincerely appreciated. Thank you.
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