Passing By the Moss Covered Rail Tides

Passing by the Moss Covered Rail Tides

The sound of the flowing water
Eases my stressed mind
As it rolls over the rocks
Passing by the moss covered rail tides
It flows so smoothly
So free
No concern for its destination 
Flowing along so freely
To a place it does not know 
Though anxious to arrive
I envy its freedom 
Its smooth flowing way
For I want to lay in it
Flow along on its merrily wild ride
From shore I watch
Drip by drip
Watch it flow by
As it rolls over the rocks 
Passing by the moss covered rail tides
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Goodman Avatar
June 11, 2013 at 3:00 PM
very beautiful...and thank you so much for your coments
A   Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 8:49 PM
Okay, one more then I will log off. a nice flow on words, a little tranquil feeling to the trail... xox~ Linda
De Burca Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 11:56 AM
Wonderful. You capture the scene so well. A peaceful retreat. I like this very much.
Sador Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 4:39 PM
Wonderfull imagery!
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