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Passing By

Sometimes life just passes by Like clouds that do not rain It is like trees running past Through the windows of your train You are caught and startled by How far you have come The years that have gone by Just don't add up To your sum And we think if there is a way To do that Once again To not hold The same umbrella And jump out In the rain

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Date: 6/19/2023 8:15:00 AM
What a Marvel! A gem of a inspired poetry about aging. It is imaginative & lyrical, with fine breaking into the stanzas & easy flow. Absolutely Love the umbrella conditional wish/dea for the ending, which is unforgettable indeed. Pramod, this is a Fav! Blessings! sally
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Date: 6/15/2023 9:45:00 PM
Short and sweet! The last verse is beautiful!
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