Passing By

One tree asks each star:
Where are you going tonight?
How is your moving
through this sacred life rhythm?
Please, come by again!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Heck Avatar
November 28, 2008 at 4:10 PM
Nice Tanka, Sue. Peaceful, inrtospective and very comforting to read. Wishing you and your loved ones Happy Holidays. Peace always, John
Higgins Avatar
November 20, 2008 at 4:06 PM
I love the personification in this piece, the trees and star coming to life. Wonderful job and I also enjoyed your blog.
Winter Avatar
November 20, 2008 at 6:12 AM
A Tanka with Personification. Love this child of the universe quality to your beautiful write. Love, Shar
De La Keur Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 10:27 PM
I love the different styles and perspective in your work. Thanks for the comments...Aleera
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