Passing

cover of clouds
parked cars crowd a narrow street
sidewalk rising and settling
a rough journey in time
leaves turning colors rustle
the neighbor across the street
she says it’s just another day
toddler at her side
a man sits on his porch
greetings offered
as people pass
two eager golden retrievers
behind a tall picket fence bark
speaking a language of their kind
a retired clerk from the police department
rakes leaves, cancer in remission
in the autumn of her life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 5:18 PM
what a pleasant read iin this "slice of life" poetry.
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 5:33 AM
- A great picture to share, Mike ... I can see them clearly :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Crabtree Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 5:19 PM
A very descriptive piece, Mike. I enjoyed it. :)
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