Pass'If'Ick, At:Land:Ick

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Pass.if.ick while listening to the Pacific w)aether(, (woe)ter from eyes pool into the soul wanting to gush, saever-- to create a great divide between memory and heart, forcing to un-feel in a dumb attempt to plunder everything into nothingness [Pass all the what-Ifs, realize the past.Icks] ``````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````` At.Land.Ick While listening to the Atlantic, the wind mixes with the waves moon realizing the gravity strumming, then pinning down the heartekestrings allowing only the silence of apprehension and suspense to vibrate moved, yet at the same time unmoving refusing to turn, to arrive and reach land left only with the sensation of f.low.ting feelings.ick [At land, tick tick--- tick- - -] 1189102015 thank you, thank you..... sleeping at last
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Salehi Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 12:38 PM
Little too powerful for my simple mind... Good night...
Neels Avatar
November 25, 2015 at 7:57 AM
Missy and her hidden messages that is all for herself to ponder on :) I miss you very much. How are things going? POP ME A MAIL!!! hehehehe just had to work on your nerves and at the same time try and make you smile. Hope you are doing good hun.. catch up soon!! *mwahugs*
Chircop Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 3:24 PM
Oh Nikko..Its so good to have you back. Oh that water that is needed to divide heart and soul from memory..and the past from the moment (today ).. To feel numb..Maybe , but to.forget is more hard..and time ticks a little more. Heartfelr poem. a fave
Gasun Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 3:16 AM
Hello my very dear friend n kabayan Nikko! You left me in awe with this stunning write of yours my dearest friend! You write superbly as always, 'Though I seldom come here on soup and your poetry, I knew from the very start how super talented you are. I'm one of your big fans dear friend. So proud of you. Btw, I came here also to thank you belatedly for your greetings on my special day last month. And belated G' and Ws to my co-Libran members of your family. Sorry, so late, pls.4give me.<3M, LG
Dietrich Avatar
November 14, 2015 at 7:36 PM
wow, you went crazy with symbolism , and that IS your forte, sweetie. I actually got it ALL!! (I think) Knowing your life flow right now and how you have been feeling. Oh, I so hope you pick yourself up and realize how much potential you have. GET out of the RUT. You are still young. DAMN, Girl, look at me , 60 now!!! I really enjoyed seeing a brand new poem from you even though it's a sad one!!
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