Tahera Mannan Poet Free verse

Passes

Let me pass honey
He said to me
I moved back
And he was ahead

Pass the food 
He said to me
I passed the potatoes
And he ate

Pass him on the road
He said to me
I zoomed ahead
He reached on time

She passed away
He said to her
I moved to heaven
He married her

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Samir Georges September 26, 2010 at 11:55 AM wonderful

Kabuteng P.Ink K. September 24, 2010 at 6:06 PM A lot of takes on the word pass here and so cool how you used them to create their story-- wish you the best in the contest Tahera :) -- nikko :)

Carolyn Devonshire September 24, 2010 at 4:21 AM I admire the creativity as well as the story behind this poem, Tahera. Nicely done! Best wishes in the "pass" contest. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta September 24, 2010 at 3:55 AM Very creative write on the word Pass, Good luck in the contest, Tahera

Nate D. September 23, 2010 at 11:09 PM A poem well done keep your fascinating poetry coming" Nathan

Andrea Dietrich September 23, 2010 at 10:24 PM A cool approach.using several meaning of the word! Good luck in the contest. Luv, Andrea