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Passes

Let me pass honey He said to me I moved back And he was ahead Pass the food He said to me I passed the potatoes And he ate Pass him on the road He said to me I zoomed ahead He reached on time She passed away He said to her I moved to heaven He married her

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Date: 9/26/2010 11:55:00 AM
wonderful
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Date: 9/24/2010 6:06:00 PM
A lot of takes on the word pass here and so cool how you used them to create their story-- wish you the best in the contest Tahera :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 9/24/2010 4:21:00 AM
I admire the creativity as well as the story behind this poem, Tahera. Nicely done! Best wishes in the "pass" contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/24/2010 3:55:00 AM
Very creative write on the word Pass, Good luck in the contest, Tahera
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Date: 9/23/2010 11:09:00 PM
A poem well done keep your fascinating poetry coming" Nathan
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Date: 9/23/2010 10:24:00 PM
A cool approach.using several meaning of the word! Good luck in the contest. Luv, Andrea
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