Passenger

I got here somewhat quickly, briskly here I lived... I don't even realize if I'm still here... or slipped away

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Jeff Connelly

Date: 7/2/2022 3:39:00 PM

I like this Alkas! We only exist in time at one particular moment in time briefly. The Hericlitis "can't step in the same stream twice" concept. Thanks Alkas. I hope I didn't overstep bounds in my interpretation?...

Jeff Connelly
Date: 7/4/2022 8:13:00 AM

So very true Alkas. I like the idea of coming back spiritually to healing old wounds. It's like the karmic cycle... Gracias Alkas...

Alkas Poetry
Date: 7/3/2022 9:58:00 AM

IN THIS LIFE, WE PASS... YOUR INTERPRETATION IS VERY GOOD, PHYSICALLY THAT'S HOW... SPIRITUALLY, WE FREQUENTLY RETURN TO THE SCENE TO REPAIR THE MALFECTS, THAT EVEN WE REACH ANOTHER STAGE... in this moment now we live... Salute Jeff, alkas