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Pass the Chalk

night's sky
resembles
a chalkboard
and i wish
i could
erase the clouds
and draw you 
next to me

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Running Wolves

Date: 12/6/2019 9:01:00 AM

Oh my this is just wonderful

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/6/2019 9:48:00 AM

Thank you so much Robert :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/6/2019 7:31:00 AM

This appeals to the artist in me in every way!

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/6/2019 9:47:00 AM

Thank you Caren...how cool would it be to sketch something on night's sky and erase and redo it however often we like? hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/6/2019 7:02:00 AM

So much said in so few words--splendid poem, Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/6/2019 9:46:00 AM

Thank you so much Vijay...my muse was doing her own little scribbles last night...none of which i envisioned when i sat down to write... hugs :)

Chris Green

Date: 12/6/2019 7:00:00 AM

Yet another beautiful and creative vision that flows from your amazing mind and heart my friend. Here's hoping your hands always hold something to write with because it sure would be a loss if they didn't.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/6/2019 9:45:00 AM

what a sweet thing to say Chris...your comment came complete with a smile, i smile back at it...my muse was seeing things her own way last night...i wanted to write for a contest she scribbled a bunch of little images... good morning my friend :) hugs

Quoth Theraven

Date: 12/5/2019 11:42:00 PM

Sandra, This is quite a nice fragment of magic. And you, the talented magician. -Richard

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/6/2019 4:55:00 AM

Thank you so much Richard sometimes I wonder where my muse comes up with this stuff... hugs :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/5/2019 11:33:00 PM

Lovely one... I adore it. God bless you sweet friend, Gina

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/6/2019 4:54:00 AM

Thank you so much Gina you are a blessing. Hugs :)

Jeff Connelly

Date: 12/5/2019 10:23:00 PM

Simple images yet so compelling Sandra. A beautiful sadness. Thanks.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/6/2019 4:53:00 AM

Thank you so much Jeff :) hugs

Ann Foster

Date: 12/5/2019 9:32:00 PM

You make me so happy and so sad all at the same time. Stop that... okay... well I like it... but stop it... but... argg... Excellent of course... that is the problem... hugs. Ann

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/6/2019 4:53:00 AM

Thank you my sweet friend. Drift on the night air. It has wings in the winds. They will carry you along. Laughter’s on the other side. Hugs