Pass the Chalk

night's sky
resembles
a chalkboard
and i wish
i could
erase the clouds
and draw you 
next to me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolves Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 9:01 AM
Oh my this is just wonderful
Adams Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 9:48 AM
Thank you so much Robert :)
Krutsinger Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 7:31 AM
This appeals to the artist in me in every way!
Adams Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 9:47 AM
Thank you Caren...how cool would it be to sketch something on night's sky and erase and redo it however often we like? hugs
Pandit Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 7:02 AM
So much said in so few words--splendid poem, Sandy.
Adams Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 9:46 AM
Thank you so much Vijay...my muse was doing her own little scribbles last night...none of which i envisioned when i sat down to write... hugs :)
Green Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 7:00 AM
Yet another beautiful and creative vision that flows from your amazing mind and heart my friend. Here's hoping your hands always hold something to write with because it sure would be a loss if they didn't.
Adams Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 9:45 AM
what a sweet thing to say Chris...your comment came complete with a smile, i smile back at it...my muse was seeing things her own way last night...i wanted to write for a contest she scribbled a bunch of little images... good morning my friend :) hugs
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December 5, 2019 at 11:42 PM
Sandra, This is quite a nice fragment of magic. And you, the talented magician. -Richard
Adams Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 4:55 AM
Thank you so much Richard sometimes I wonder where my muse comes up with this stuff... hugs :)
Mcintosh Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 11:33 PM
Lovely one... I adore it. God bless you sweet friend, Gina
Adams Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 4:54 AM
Thank you so much Gina you are a blessing. Hugs :)
Connelly Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 10:23 PM
Simple images yet so compelling Sandra. A beautiful sadness. Thanks.
Adams Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 4:53 AM
Thank you so much Jeff :) hugs
Foster Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 9:32 PM
You make me so happy and so sad all at the same time. Stop that... okay... well I like it... but stop it... but... argg... Excellent of course... that is the problem... hugs. Ann
Adams Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 4:53 AM
Thank you my sweet friend. Drift on the night air. It has wings in the winds. They will carry you along. Laughter’s on the other side. Hugs
Na Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 9:14 PM
Very nice Sandra. If only we could erase the bad things and paint in what we want and bring it to life. Thanks for sharing this
Adams Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 4:51 AM
Thanks Greg my muse has a mind of her own at times :) hugs
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