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Pass On Store

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                               Son's radiant beams reach out
                                   Touch of energy for all
                              Restore, refresh_pass on store

                        One gift given, one gift accepted_share

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Eiken Laan

Date: 1/4/2011 4:33:00 AM

This is beautiful. a majestic morning's sunrise glowed brightly behind the silhouette spruce trees radiating love and peace I saw the apple sun with a bite bitten from the side a partial eclipse of the sun today from my bedroom window one gift given, one gift accepted _ share

Fabiyas M V

Date: 1/1/2011 8:02:00 PM

Very emotional write,Sara.I enjoyed it this morning

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/1/2011 6:12:00 PM

well written!

Jancarl Campi

Date: 1/1/2011 3:54:00 PM

Hi Sandra, Thanks and it was a nice surprise to me. The words in your work "Pass On Store" are most beautiful. Have a great 2011!! Papagallo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/1/2011 3:50:00 PM

Beautiful words expressed amidst all the sorrows u have had to endure ... lovely free verse Sara with so much emotion .. luv it..

William Kershaw

Date: 1/1/2011 3:02:00 PM

Sara, Thanks for this gift. I accept. Thank you so much for your kind review of my stuff. Love, Will

The Situation

Date: 1/1/2011 2:30:00 PM

this is the wonder of the season. T.S

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/1/2011 10:46:00 AM

A beautiful write of faith, Sara. I guess we can view a church as a "pass on store" because there is the exchange of gifts for all who enter. I hope your husband's condition is continuing to improve. May 2011 bring your family health and joy. Love, Carolyn