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Pas De Deux

Two dancers in sync We were made for each other But you're sick with the drink Twisting and turning Our steps I do trace I am locked here alone In this stoic embrace. 17.04.09 Composed for Charlotte Jade Puddifoot's Open Poetry Contest 2

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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 5/2/2017 12:11:00 PM
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A lovely poem and title, Maureen. Side by side, one is awake and the other rest, still together in sync. Picture perfect imagery ... stoic embrace. Elegantly plain spoken poetry. A 7 for offering this rich treat. Love and hugs.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/3/2017 7:25:00 AM
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Thank you Freddie, still in the tango ;) Have a wonderful day! xomo
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 4/18/2017 9:24:00 AM
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Very pretty Maureen.
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Mike Hauser
Date: 4/17/2017 4:24:00 PM
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Nice
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Darren White
Date: 4/16/2017 4:17:00 AM
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Très beaux, ma mo... It has a little sadness in it. Hugs xx Good luck in the contest!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/16/2017 7:30:00 AM
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Merci mon coeur xomo
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Keith Baucum
Date: 4/13/2017 5:27:00 AM
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I enjoyed this poem.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/13/2017 12:20:00 PM
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Thank you :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/11/2017 8:28:00 AM
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Hi Maureen, love it , you make me smile :)
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/12/2017 10:03:00 PM
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Ty! & goody ;)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/10/2017 10:59:00 AM
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The author pours out her soul, and paints her words with pathos and emotion. Emile.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/10/2017 6:54:00 PM
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...so does the author with a flip of a coin as to whether or not she is glad anyone is listening.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/10/2017 2:04:00 AM
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Tres bien ma chere amie ! Profound message. I liked it dear, Maureen.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/10/2017 9:09:00 AM
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Thank dear Demetrios. It is a disease to reckon with; I must say as I get healthier my enabling less is having a positive effect. Bless xomo!
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/9/2017 10:09:00 PM
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You have a great sense of humor Maureen :) Amitiés
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Darren White
Date: 4/16/2017 4:19:00 AM
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Keep the letter pressed mo, for a few seconds, and watch the effect.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/10/2017 9:04:00 AM
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Admittedly I do ;) It helps to make life more liveable. Enchante! (sorry I still haven't figured out how to get my accents on my iPad) xomo!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/9/2017 9:37:00 PM
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oh la la , très bien cher!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/10/2017 9:01:00 AM
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Merci beaucoup! :)
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 4/9/2017 7:16:00 PM
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well done, maureen! i love the way you've used rhyme here...
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/10/2017 8:58:00 AM
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Thank you Ilene :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/9/2017 9:31:00 AM
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What could have been a beautiful dance ...Lovely Maureen
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/9/2017 9:36:00 AM
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I'm still in this dance, trying not to get my toes stepped on ;) xomo Thank you Tim!

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