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Pas De Deux

Two dancers in sync
We were made for each other
But you're sick with the drink
Twisting and turning
Our steps I do trace
I am locked here alone
In this stoic embrace.


17.04.09

Composed for Charlotte Jade Puddifoot's Open Poetry Contest 2

Copyright © Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart | Year Posted 2017

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Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 5/2/2017 12:11:00 PM A lovely poem and title, Maureen. Side by side, one is awake and the other rest, still together in sync. Picture perfect imagery ... stoic embrace. Elegantly plain spoken poetry. A 7 for offering this rich treat. Love and hugs. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/3/2017 7:25:00 AM Thank you Freddie, still in the tango ;) Have a wonderful day! xomo

Jannie Breedt Date: 4/18/2017 9:24:00 AM Very pretty Maureen. Login to Reply

Mike Hauser Date: 4/17/2017 4:24:00 PM Nice Login to Reply

Darren White Date: 4/16/2017 4:17:00 AM Très beaux, ma mo... It has a little sadness in it. Hugs xx Good luck in the contest! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/16/2017 7:30:00 AM Merci mon coeur xomo

Keith Baucum Date: 4/13/2017 5:27:00 AM I enjoyed this poem. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/13/2017 12:20:00 PM Thank you :)

Emile Pinet Date: 4/10/2017 10:59:00 AM The author pours out her soul, and paints her words with pathos and emotion. Emile. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/10/2017 6:54:00 PM ...so does the author with a flip of a coin as to whether or not she is glad anyone is listening.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 4/10/2017 2:04:00 AM Tres bien ma chere amie ! Profound message. I liked it dear, Maureen. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/10/2017 9:09:00 AM Thank dear Demetrios. It is a disease to reckon with; I must say as I get healthier my enabling less is having a positive effect. Bless xomo!

Anne-Marie Coreggia Date: 4/9/2017 10:09:00 PM You have a great sense of humor Maureen :) Amitiés Login to Reply Darren White Date: 4/16/2017 4:19:00 AM Keep the letter pressed mo, for a few seconds, and watch the effect. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/10/2017 9:04:00 AM Admittedly I do ;) It helps to make life more liveable. Enchante! (sorry I still haven't figured out how to get my accents on my iPad) xomo!

Arthur Vaso Date: 4/9/2017 9:37:00 PM oh la la , très bien cher! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/10/2017 9:01:00 AM Merci beaucoup! :)

Ilene Bauer Date: 4/9/2017 7:16:00 PM well done, maureen! i love the way you've used rhyme here... Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/10/2017 8:58:00 AM Thank you Ilene :)

Tim Smith Date: 4/9/2017 9:31:00 AM What could have been a beautiful dance ...Lovely Maureen Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/9/2017 9:36:00 AM I'm still in this dance, trying not to get my toes stepped on ;) xomo Thank you Tim!