Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Poet Rhyme

Pas De Deux

Two dancers in sync
We were made for each other
But you're sick with the drink
Twisting and turning
Our steps I do trace
I am locked here alone
In this stoic embrace.


17.04.09

Composed for Charlotte Jade Puddifoot's Open Poetry Contest 2

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Freddie Robinson Jr. May 2, 2017 at 12:11 PM A lovely poem and title, Maureen. Side by side, one is awake and the other rest, still together in sync. Picture perfect imagery ... stoic embrace. Elegantly plain spoken poetry. A 7 for offering this rich treat. Love and hugs. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 3, 2017 at 7:25 AM Thank you Freddie, still in the tango ;) Have a wonderful day! xomo

Jannie Breedt April 18, 2017 at 9:24 AM Very pretty Maureen.

Mike Hauser April 17, 2017 at 4:24 PM Nice

Darren White April 16, 2017 at 4:17 AM Très beaux, ma mo... It has a little sadness in it. Hugs xx Good luck in the contest! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 16, 2017 at 7:30 AM Merci mon coeur xomo

Keith Baucum April 13, 2017 at 5:27 AM I enjoyed this poem. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 13, 2017 at 12:20 PM Thank you :)

Emile Pinet April 10, 2017 at 10:59 AM The author pours out her soul, and paints her words with pathos and emotion. Emile. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 10, 2017 at 6:54 PM ...so does the author with a flip of a coin as to whether or not she is glad anyone is listening.

Demetrios Trifiatis April 10, 2017 at 2:04 AM Tres bien ma chere amie ! Profound message. I liked it dear, Maureen. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 10, 2017 at 9:09 AM Thank dear Demetrios. It is a disease to reckon with; I must say as I get healthier my enabling less is having a positive effect. Bless xomo!

Anne-Marie Coreggia April 9, 2017 at 10:09 PM You have a great sense of humor Maureen :) Amitiés Darren White April 16, 2017 at 4:19 AM Keep the letter pressed mo, for a few seconds, and watch the effect. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 10, 2017 at 9:04 AM Admittedly I do ;) It helps to make life more liveable. Enchante! (sorry I still haven't figured out how to get my accents on my iPad) xomo!

Arthur Vaso April 9, 2017 at 9:37 PM oh la la , très bien cher! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 10, 2017 at 9:01 AM Merci beaucoup! :)

Ilene Bauer April 9, 2017 at 7:16 PM well done, maureen! i love the way you've used rhyme here... Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 10, 2017 at 8:58 AM Thank you Ilene :)

Tim Smith April 9, 2017 at 9:31 AM What could have been a beautiful dance ...Lovely Maureen Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 9, 2017 at 9:36 AM I'm still in this dance, trying not to get my toes stepped on ;) xomo Thank you Tim!