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Pas De Deux

All our Love's vicissitudes,
Our amorous, glamorous attitudes
Two Hearts pounding, the grand resounding
With sincerest gratitude
In Perfect Passion, ardor action,
Paramours enraptured fashion
To you devoted, the walls have folded
I lose myself in your attraction...
Everything I have given you,
My Heart, my Soul, my Pas de Deux
Together forever, this sweet endeavor,
Until at last we say adieu

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Teresa Godwin March 20, 2014 at 8:13 PM Wow. Wow. Awesome. You make it sound so easy. ~Teresa Just That Archaic Poet March 21, 2014 at 8:37 AM Thanks, hon :)

Debbie Guzzi March 20, 2014 at 7:44 PM Love the use of French & the internal rhyme - rhyme on Light & love Just That Archaic Poet March 21, 2014 at 8:38 AM Thank you so much, my dear Debbie <3 :)

Sophia Valentina March 19, 2014 at 4:13 PM LOVE IT! How romantic :) Just That Archaic Poet March 20, 2014 at 9:48 AM Thanks, Bish! ;)

Eileen Manassian March 19, 2014 at 2:36 PM Lovely, Chan...see? I agree...it's so sweet when things RHYME! By the way...read your previous poem as well...the one Chris commented on...wanted to sing the words like Freddie Mercury! It was sweet. I tried posting on it earlier...something went wrong. Great poems here. You rocked the show with Drake! Love your accent. :) Sorry my reading was bunk. Got flustered with the time element as sort of rushed it! Oh well...Next time. Just That Archaic Poet March 20, 2014 at 9:49 AM Your reading was just fine, Eileen. I loved that you called in and read your beautiful poem. Thanks so much for all the kind words and compliments. You have made my morning that much more wonderful <3

Rick Richardson March 19, 2014 at 12:23 PM Pass the ducks, let's sing this 'un together, forever. Love it. Just That Archaic Poet March 19, 2014 at 12:51 PM Thanks so much, Rick; I do appreciate it :)