Party Over Here

I looked a gorgeous a-- in the face
delivered a thick compliment
then murmured contempt for them under my breath

the desire to bond or even agree to disagree
gave way to a bevy of jousting eyeballs
that nearly brought me to fatigue

I should have taken my cue from a drunken uncle 
who hid everything behind shot glass and guffaw
while hurling insults under the guise of synonyms

I probably take myself too seriously 
but we all must have some sort of defense
why get pummeled by those who can’t even keep a job

garcon more oysters on a half shell please
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 10:17 AM
Hello Richard, I agree. have a nice day my friend.
Evans Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 7:27 AM
Thanks Darlene...…...
Cresswell Avatar
October 19, 2017 at 6:44 PM
well done.
Evans Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 1:06 AM
Thanks.............
One Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 5:09 AM
Well written Richard..
Evans Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 6:34 PM
S.O. my greatest challenge as a poet is knowing when to stop the rewrite. I had to literally sit on my hands to stop myself from rewriting this poem. Thanks for your input...............peace!
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