Party Over Here

I looked a gorgeous a-- in the face
delivered a thick compliment
then murmured contempt for them under my breath

the desire to bond or even agree to disagree
gave way to a bevy of jousting eyeballs
that nearly brought me to fatigue

I should have taken my cue from a drunken uncle 
who hid everything behind shot glass and guffaw
while hurling insults under the guise of synonyms

I probably take myself too seriously 
but we all must have some sort of defense
why get pummeled by those who can’t even keep a job

garcon more oysters on a half shell please
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 11/5/2018 10:17:00 AM
Hello Richard, I agree. have a nice day my friend.
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Ricky Muse
Date: 11/6/2018 7:27:00 AM
Thanks Darlene...…...
Date: 10/19/2017 6:44:00 PM
well done.
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Date: 10/20/2017 1:06:00 AM
Thanks.............
Date: 10/18/2017 5:09:00 AM
Well written Richard..
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Date: 10/18/2017 6:34:00 PM
S.O. my greatest challenge as a poet is knowing when to stop the rewrite. I had to literally sit on my hands to stop myself from rewriting this poem. Thanks for your input...............peace!
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