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Party - For One

party....for one

so many people
yelling, drinking - only I 
hear the clock...


2/23/13

lonelysenryu

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Jack Horne

July 5, 2014 at 4:20 PM

oh, love this thoughtful, clever write, Susan. Thanks again for the PM - will try holding a contest soon. Have a lovely weekend x

Michael Dom

April 1, 2014 at 4:04 AM

Cindarella momnet? You are going to my fav poets. So there.

Royal Ninja

April 10, 2013 at 1:07 PM

seems as if your waiting for someone and time is passing and still no date?, enjoyed this one Susan, wanted to thank you for your comment on my write Angel Wings, hugs-x, Royal

Jack Horne

March 31, 2013 at 4:20 PM

love this thoughtful write, Susan - thanks very much - loved the bench contest. Have a great Easter

Sara Kendrick

March 27, 2013 at 1:45 PM

Enjoyed reading your Senryu..I would be the one hearing the clock..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..Sara

Joyce Johnson

March 27, 2013 at 1:36 PM

Nicely written Susan. Thank you for your interesting contest and for my no. 1 shared win. It was fun. Love, J

Kathryn Collins

March 26, 2013 at 8:32 AM

tick tick. Sometimes it seems like I'm the only one not whooping it up. Great poem in a small package.

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 24, 2013 at 8:44 AM

- A party with much noise ...... well done, B.E.S. - Have a lovely Easter. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

March 9, 2013 at 1:46 AM

yes, this is really good, Susan!!! I'm waiting for more!

Poet Destroyer A

March 8, 2013 at 3:25 PM

hum.... them appointments are making my head twirl. i guess when i'm stuck in a party like that the clock ticks, for me to run like that Cinder, girl, into my own little world... anyways.. I'm way off base... ha ha but aren't we all.... PS... read my comment to you on my latest poem... i thought it was funny...pd