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People arrive, bringing presents which are wrapped in pretty pink packaging. Parents have organised pizza and ice cream then pamper sessions as treats - pass the parcel's passé! Pleiades P Poetry Contest Sponsored by Kim Merryman 6 Syllables per line checked with HMS 04/09/21

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/13/2021 11:07:00 PM

Wow!! A great winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/13/2021 8:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I am ready, Let's Party. Love the fun write and dancing picture. Have a blessed day............

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/13/2021 2:46:00 AM

- A big party for your win, Jan ... Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/12/2021 1:49:00 PM

Jan, a fun portrayal of a party! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2021 1:16:00 PM

Awesome entry, my friend. Congrats on the win

Paul Callus

Date: 4/12/2021 12:44:00 PM

This is a very good entry for Kim's contest, Jan. I'm not much of a party man, but I like to see others enjoying themselves, especially the young ones. Hugs // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 4/10/2021 8:31:00 PM

Great write, Jan, it flows like water just pure and perfect. Hugs Eve

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/10/2021 10:29:00 AM

Party over here! Save me some pizza, I'm on my way :)

Mark Koplin

Date: 4/10/2021 5:58:00 AM

An excellent party Jan! I'm ready for cake now.

Judy Ball

Date: 4/10/2021 2:46:00 AM

Too cute Jan. Love your sense of humor. God Bless, JB

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/10/2021 1:04:00 AM

Great Pleiades, Jan. Loved it right through.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 4/9/2021 11:05:00 PM

Hello Jan ... the kids birthday parties. You've got my memory juices flowing Jan - thanks Jan - Lindsay

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/9/2021 12:40:00 PM

Brought back memories when my daughters used to have all their friends around ill never forget the noise lol. Have a great weekend Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2021 1:23:00 PM

I can imagine the fun they had Tom:-) hugs Jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/9/2021 12:17:00 PM

Hello Jan, this is cute. enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/10/2021 11:44:00 AM

Hello Jan, you are welcome my friend. hugs.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2021 1:23:00 PM

thanks Darlene:-) hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 4/9/2021 11:24:00 AM

Plenty pee their pants from excitement? Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2021 11:30:00 AM

ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/9/2021 11:18:00 AM

Hi Jan, Your descriptions of your title were very good. Now let start the music and let's get this party started! Never mind, It's a kid party. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2021 11:30:00 AM

Thanks Alexis, I know the parties have moved on a pace these days with pamper parties and things like that lol:-) hugs jan xx