Jan Allison Poet Verse

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Party

People arrive, bringing
presents which are wrapped in
pretty pink packaging.
Parents have organised
pizza and ice cream then
pamper sessions as treats -
pass the parcel's passé!

Pleiades P Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Kim Merryman

6 Syllables per line checked with HMS

04/09/21

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Sara Kendrick April 13, 2021 at 11:07 PM Wow!! A great winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara

Paula Goldsmith April 13, 2021 at 8:29 AM Congratulations on your win. I am ready, Let's Party. Love the fun write and dancing picture. Have a blessed day............

Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2021 at 2:46 AM - A big party for your win, Jan ... Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman April 12, 2021 at 1:49 PM Jan, a fun portrayal of a party! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Andrea Dietrich April 12, 2021 at 1:16 PM Awesome entry, my friend. Congrats on the win

Paul Callus April 12, 2021 at 12:44 PM This is a very good entry for Kim's contest, Jan. I'm not much of a party man, but I like to see others enjoying themselves, especially the young ones. Hugs // paul

Eve Roper April 10, 2021 at 8:31 PM Great write, Jan, it flows like water just pure and perfect. Hugs Eve

Michelle Faulkner April 10, 2021 at 10:29 AM Party over here! Save me some pizza, I'm on my way :)

Mark Koplin April 10, 2021 at 5:58 AM An excellent party Jan! I'm ready for cake now.

Judy Ball April 10, 2021 at 2:46 AM Too cute Jan. Love your sense of humor. God Bless, JB

Victor Buhagiar April 10, 2021 at 1:04 AM Great Pleiades, Jan. Loved it right through.

Lindsay Laurie April 9, 2021 at 11:05 PM Hello Jan ... the kids birthday parties. You've got my memory juices flowing Jan - thanks Jan - Lindsay

Tom Cunningham April 9, 2021 at 12:40 PM Brought back memories when my daughters used to have all their friends around ill never forget the noise lol. Have a great weekend Tom Jan Allison April 9, 2021 at 1:23 PM I can imagine the fun they had Tom:-) hugs Jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu April 9, 2021 at 12:17 PM Hello Jan, this is cute. enjoy your day my friend. Hugs. Darlene De Beaulieu April 10, 2021 at 11:44 AM Hello Jan, you are welcome my friend. hugs. Jan Allison April 9, 2021 at 1:23 PM thanks Darlene:-) hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta April 9, 2021 at 11:24 AM Plenty pee their pants from excitement? Aloha! Rico Jan Allison April 9, 2021 at 11:30 AM ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. April 9, 2021 at 11:18 AM Hi Jan, Your descriptions of your title were very good. Now let start the music and let's get this party started! Never mind, It's a kid party. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis Jan Allison April 9, 2021 at 11:30 AM Thanks Alexis, I know the parties have moved on a pace these days with pamper parties and things like that lol:-) hugs jan xx