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Every time I look at you my heart bleeds through my eyes. Whenever my thoughts turn to you stars fall from bleeding skies. My mouth has words I dare not say, my mind is full of ‘why’s. Wickedness still lingers, love, within your sleepy thighs. Motionless my life appears after those sad goodbyes. Why does everything you love have to wilt and die? But I believe in forever love, better days ahead. So I refuse to sing the blues that make my eyes turn red. For better or worse (hope for the first), take it either way. I kept the parts of us I loved and threw the rest away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/17/2019 8:18:00 AM
Wow! This is beautiful and so very deep! Love this!
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Date: 5/3/2018 7:56:00 AM
Very nice, Phil! Congrats!
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Date: 5/3/2018 6:41:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Phil.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 5/3/2018 7:22:00 AM
Thanks Line, always nice to feel the love. Namaste.
Date: 5/3/2018 5:56:00 AM
Beautiful, Phil. Many congrats on your win. Sincerely, Elaine
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Phil Capitano
Date: 5/3/2018 7:21:00 AM
Thanks Elaine for the shout-out, your poem of the Fundy Bay home was enthralling. Congrats to you as well.
Date: 5/3/2018 5:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement. Well done.
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Date: 5/2/2018 2:58:00 PM
Hello Phil, lots of pain written here,is what I read in this poem. These people in this poem should get counselling to work out their feelings. It is my opinion. have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/4/2018 1:49:00 PM
I so agree, love is not easy.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 5/3/2018 7:15:00 AM
Love is not easy, Darlene, thanks for stopping by and commenting. Namaste.

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