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Partridge Charlieku 3-3-3

fallen snow
three rolled balls
snowman grins

at partridge
perched on a
Christmas tree

joined waiting
turtle doves
out the cold 

12/6/2018

Poetry Contest: Charlieku 3-3-3 
Sponsored by: Charles Messina
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kendrick Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 1:44 PM
Creative way to go with this contest theme. A great winner. Congrats. Sara
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January 1, 2019 at 11:49 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the Charlieku, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Messina Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 7:43 PM
Awesome poetry, Eve. Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Wishing you a very healthy and Happy New Year...Charlie
Roper Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 8:07 PM
Thank you Charles. I seem to not get the page to see if I placed :(
La France Avatar
December 14, 2018 at 3:46 PM
Eve, this is sweet, best of luck in the contest ~
Breidenthal Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 4:47 AM
Awesome poem here - I like the rhythm and the way it is written. Really unique and fascinating !
Callus Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 3:19 AM
An enjoyable set of Charlieku, Eve. Best of luck for the contest. Hugs // paul
Garcia Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 2:28 AM
I dig it! The picture cracks me up and the poetry is up to your normal, very high, standard. I'll have to read up on this form, seems like a fun challenge
Trifiatis Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 5:36 AM
Delightfully written dearest, Eve!
Green Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 8:09 AM
Really nicely done Eve. Best wishes in the contest
Kiser Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 6:22 AM
What a cute photo! Great flow and imagery in this Charlieku; good luck.
Allison Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 3:12 AM
I especially love the first one eve, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Vaso Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 1:04 AM
Great imagery, Xmas with a touch of melancholy.
Cunningham Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 12:40 AM
Lovely hakiu Eve, can't believe Christmas is on us again. Good luck. Tom.
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