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Partly Cloudy Pastiche, Catie

Cloudy
Ominous display
Lowering, twisting, threatening.
Bleak, severe?            Gentle showers?
Refreshing, newness, refreshing 
Blue             sky
Sunshine

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Debbie Guzzi

December 2, 2012 at 2:48 PM

Nice to read your work today Loved the line layout as well as the write James. Light & Love

James Tate

December 4, 2012 at 5:53 PM

Debbie, it is nice to communicate with a great poet like you.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 23, 2012 at 4:34 PM

CONGRATS JAMES ON A STELLAR RECREATION OF CATIE'S POEM LUV ..

Harry Horsman

October 23, 2012 at 3:09 PM

congrats, on this wonderful winner....

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 23, 2012 at 6:20 AM

Congratulations on your win in Catie's "Re-Write" contest James. Love, Carol

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

October 22, 2012 at 8:13 PM

A real piece of diamond. A brilliant shape poem too. Words and images tangled in a masterpiece. Thanks for clouds and sunshine altogether: that's our life. Congratulations on your win, James! :) I am Hanitra

Caryl Muzzey

October 21, 2012 at 11:51 AM

An excellent write James, congratulations on your win in Catie's contest. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

Bukang Liwayway

October 21, 2012 at 10:12 AM

Congratulations friend James on your win!! cheers!!

Poet Destroyer A

October 20, 2012 at 9:25 PM

James,, , congratulations with your win...pd

Len Gasun

October 20, 2012 at 8:26 PM

Congratulations on your win, James! hugs:) Leonora

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 20, 2012 at 1:15 PM

CONGRATS JAMES ON WINNING AN HM FOR THIS AMAZING RE-WRITE OF CATIE'S POEM LUV ..

Joy Wellington

October 20, 2012 at 1:02 PM

Catie did justice with the original of this poem in my "Weather Contest" and you have matched her penned brilliance with this copy James. Congrats. Joy Wells

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 10, 2012 at 2:09 PM

Stopping by your poetry list today to tell you thank you for your kind comments on my writing. Your comment was truly appreciated James. Love, Carol

Partly Cloudy Pastiche, Catie

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