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Written Nov 2 2025 for Craig Cornish's contest PARTLY CLOUDY

Partly Cloudy

Passion seeps from red crying eyes
Amber warnings in soft heavy sighs
Ready to abandon this love affair
Turquoise hopes turn into despair 
Love gone cold once was so hot
Yellow flower petals say love me not

Cloudy sky forecasting our doom
Liquid lies melting mother moon
Onyx night beautiful with silver stars
Under this sky you break my heart
Don’t deny that you still want me
Your eyes don’t lie they are piercing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Hind Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 7:28 PM
Great job with this prompt!! Flowed well :)
Jones Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 7:36 PM
Thanks Paige! I just corrected an error. Auto correct sucks! I had no ideas for this prompt! Lol
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