Parting Walk In A Wet Lane


Away from the full moon glow
and the gilded streaks of street lamps
she steps ahead with grace unsilhouetted.
Her face beneath the tilted hat
flushes with the radiance of golden bouquet
she gets as the last gift
from him walking away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 12:50 PM
Unique and wonderful interpretation of the picture. Big congrats
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 10:17 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea for nice comments.
Sharma Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 6:44 AM
A sweet and sour parting. Congratulations on the winning placement.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 10:16 AM
Thank you.
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