Francine Roberts Poet Haiku

Partiers In Spring Dresses

as if agreeing

   lilacs bob their heads in breeze

      ....crocuses amused


warming their faces

    tulips look towards the sun....

        just happy to be


delightfully vain

    partiers in spring dresses

       .... flowers in full bloom

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Andrea Dietrich January 29, 2011 at 5:14 PM This is so nice, a lovely trio for us to get in the springtime mood. Thanks for your quick response. I was afraid I was going a bit crazy! Luv, Andrea

Jimmy Anderson January 27, 2011 at 7:40 PM Very nice Haiku's ...Jimmy

Sara Kendrick January 27, 2011 at 8:14 AM Good work..Very creative...Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

Robert Pettit January 26, 2011 at 8:58 PM Nice trio of haiku you have here Francine. However, what kind of word is "partier"? Do you really mean to include "partyer" (someone who goes to parties) for your title?

Nette Onclaud January 26, 2011 at 12:12 PM delightful visuals from your fine-point pen, francine!! winning wishes to you! :)