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Partiers In Spring Dresses

as if agreeing lilacs bob their heads in breeze ....crocuses amused warming their faces tulips look towards the sun.... just happy to be delightfully vain partiers in spring dresses .... flowers in full bloom

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2011 5:14:00 PM

This is so nice, a lovely trio for us to get in the springtime mood. Thanks for your quick response. I was afraid I was going a bit crazy! Luv, Andrea

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 1/27/2011 7:40:00 PM

Very nice Haiku's ...Jimmy

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/27/2011 8:14:00 AM

Good work..Very creative...Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/26/2011 8:58:00 PM

Nice trio of haiku you have here Francine. However, what kind of word is "partier"? Do you really mean to include "partyer" (someone who goes to parties) for your title?

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/26/2011 12:12:00 PM

delightful visuals from your fine-point pen, francine!! winning wishes to you! :)