Particles

P ulling alike, pushing away opposites
A toms floating, drifting here and there
R eally cool structures as they join
T ogether they form something that's new
I ntegral to each other, being one too lonely
C hanging, growing, then they split apart 
L eaving to start all over with other atoms
E ach with positive or negative charge
S haping, forming, joining, some repelling
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
September 8, 2013 at 2:47 PM
Good one, Shadow. You are focused on particles lately!!
Hamilton Avatar
September 8, 2013 at 3:01 PM
be something else soon and no I don't yet know what lol a dream a word a sentence it can be anything. Sometimes I wake up remembering a poem I wrote in my sleep. ty for reading
Beaufort Avatar
September 8, 2013 at 7:22 AM
You must have taken some chemistry courses! You have a very pleasant outlook on how things work.
Hamilton Avatar
September 8, 2013 at 2:59 PM
a little at school. my knowledge of atoms comes from being a radio ham ty again for reading Shadow x smile
Hamilton Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 7:39 PM
ty my dearest friend Love Shadow x smile
Mohammed Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 5:55 PM
Excellently crafted my friend.
Hamilton Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 7:40 PM
ty my dearest friend Love Shadow x smile
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