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P ulling alike, pushing away opposites A toms floating, drifting here and there R eally cool structures as they join T ogether they form something that's new I ntegral to each other, being one too lonely C hanging, growing, then they split apart L eaving to start all over with other atoms E ach with positive or negative charge S haping, forming, joining, some repelling

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Date: 9/8/2013 2:47:00 PM
Good one, Shadow. You are focused on particles lately!!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/8/2013 3:01:00 PM
be something else soon and no I don't yet know what lol a dream a word a sentence it can be anything. Sometimes I wake up remembering a poem I wrote in my sleep. ty for reading
Date: 9/8/2013 7:22:00 AM
You must have taken some chemistry courses! You have a very pleasant outlook on how things work.
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Date: 9/8/2013 2:59:00 PM
a little at school. my knowledge of atoms comes from being a radio ham ty again for reading Shadow x smile
Date: 9/6/2013 7:39:00 PM
ty my dearest friend Love Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/6/2013 5:55:00 PM
Excellently crafted my friend.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/6/2013 7:40:00 PM
ty my dearest friend Love Shadow x smile

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