Victor Van Beuren Poet Free verse

Partial Solar Eclipse -- Austin 30 May 1984

There was a solar eclipse today.
Only partial, but enough to make you want to look.
It made me sad.
I didn't have a piece of smoked glass or ultra-dark Ray Bans, and certainly not a solar scope.
Looking up, I saw the sun flash through leaf-made pinholes waving in the breeze.
Disappointed, I looked down,...
and discovered a thousand crescent suns dancing at my feet.

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Pratap Roy July 13, 2019 at 1:17 PM A poem of wisdom. Nicely penned the message. Regards, Roy Victor Van Beuren July 13, 2019 at 2:55 PM Roy. Thank you. The experience really touched me. I was unhappy that I didn't have the "proper" equipment to watch the eclipse directly. When I saw the "crescent shadows" I couldn't believe how lucky I was. You know, natural systems/phenomena rule! Thanks. Vic