Eiken Laan Poet Free verse

Partial Eclipse of the Sun Seen In Ireland Today

It was a majestic sunrise
as a honeyed circle rose behind tall silhouette trees
emanating wonder and peace
an apple sun
with a bite bitten
the garden of Eden flashed my mind
as a partial eclipse of the sun glowed
a very special good morning 
watching the moon circle the sun

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Seema Ali January 13, 2011 at 6:43 AM Beautiful.Thank you for words of praise on the poem which I have written.-Seema

Liz Walsh January 7, 2011 at 6:50 AM My new favourite - Liz

Eamon Duffin January 5, 2011 at 2:40 PM Hi M. Saw your photos and thought that If we were going to bring out another CD, that I would ask if we could use one. I commented that those spruce in silhouette would exude poetry. Beautiful. Thanks for comment on Rhymeatic Struggle. I think that was fy first attempt at free verse. I still find it difficult. I'm of a sun, moon June era. Eamon

Sara Kendrick January 4, 2011 at 6:30 AM I haven't ever experienced an eclipse of the sun but I experienced a lunar eclipse which had awe inspiring effect on me..I am so glad that you shared this with us today...Your presence at my work made my morning brighter..Sara