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Part Time Poet

Her brain thinks of a double entendre Then it's lost in a basket of laundry It comes together on the second rinse Her muse rhymes a verb but it's the wrong tense Then comes an hour that seems to be lull In mid - sonnet a diaper gets full She thinks of roses while she smells the mess And tries to describe a lover's caress So the day goes by amidst the troubles A roast simmers while a Haiku bubbles A couplet and a rhyme get done 'fore bed As she turns her thoughts to the man she wed Life went on in one world then the other Poet extraordinare, wife and mother She saw her best work and also her worst Somehow she kept her family first For a part time poet the years flew by Now the children are gone and she knows why All those years provided the fertile ground For the full time poet's life she has found 6-28-19 Contest: Part Time Poet Sponsor:Michelle Faulkner

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Date: 7/13/2019 3:59:00 PM
This is superb poem of a part time poet...I am always doing one then the other too...but not to a full time extent. Congrats on a deserving 1st place win.
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Date: 7/11/2019 5:54:00 PM
I'm not sure who the woman is, but this is a lovely tribute to her - congratulations on your win, Larry, and thanks for entering my contest!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 7/11/2019 9:13:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle...both for the compliment and the placement. An enjoyable contest!!
Date: 7/11/2019 8:57:00 AM
A great poem and well deserving of your top win! Congratulations :)
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 7/11/2019 2:10:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi!
Date: 7/2/2019 1:36:00 PM
Again, a great rhythmic flow and fantastic content, Larry. These lines: 'So the day goes by amidst the troubles A roast simmers while a Haiku bubbles' were wonderful!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 7/2/2019 2:19:00 PM
You are most kind in your comments, Wendy! Thank you..
Date: 6/29/2019 5:54:00 PM
Hello Larry Bradfield, so nice to meet you. Now that her children are grown, she has found her passion for creating poetry. have a nice evening my friend.So nice to meet you. have a nice evening my friend.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 7/1/2019 6:55:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene

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