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An opera of canaries wanes in, An alphasphere buttercup hall, curtain, Rises as a lavender stage prepares, For a star-studded performance appears. Date: 06/16/2019

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Date: 6/25/2019 5:46:00 PM
Hi, William. I love the yellowness and purpleness of your poem, resonant of a night sky lit with stars, thanks for sharing, Rachel
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Date: 6/25/2019 6:12:00 PM
I am indeed gratified for your gracious and astute commentary ~ William

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