Shivani Gulati Poet Rhyme

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Without you, my pal I will be lost in life,
Because you are the person who fills me with life.
Without you , my best friend , I will be black n white ,
Because you are the one who has filled me with light.
Without you, my pal my life will be dipped in vile, 
Because you are the one setting my face  with a   smile.
Without you, my friend, I will not feel complete,
Because when I ‘m with you Bad memories automatically delete.
Without you my friend , my whole system will jam,
Because you fill my life with action n all the boom baam !
Without you my best friend I dunno where will I be ?
For now I smile because you are still with me .

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Carol Sunshine Brown May 16, 2011 at 5:29 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Shivani. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 12, 2011 at 5:15 PM Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your most creative poetry tonight..hope u have fun on P.S. as u share with luv..

Kash Poet May 12, 2011 at 8:10 AM Must be a wonderful friend of you!Lovely poem....

Dr.Ram Mehta May 12, 2011 at 7:45 AM Nice passionate flow of feelings for a pal, Shivani,