Part 2

sharing and giving
but so few worshiping

have they forgotten 
what they should be remembering

a child was born
to give us life

there were no reindeer
nor were there elves

some shepards and animals
and a birth in a cave

there arrived the Magi
giving us the sign

if there be salvation
now will be the time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Wesley Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 5:19 AM
Beautifully said; when we shed all the fluff around that time we get down to the real reason for this wonderful event. You say it so well! Luv, Lizzie
Bridge Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 3:52 AM
really liked this peice it flows well the grammer and content are very good and well done on being featured my friend keep writing
Brown Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 7:39 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured here at PoetrySoup this week The Situation. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol
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January 23, 2011 at 4:03 PM
Congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all...with luv..
Kendrick Avatar
January 1, 2011 at 3:08 PM
Great one testifying of your faith..Enjoyed reading this eve..Delighted that you stopped by my work and commented..Sara
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December 25, 2010 at 9:35 PM
a true message in your words of this precious and believing write,,,Blessings..Cecil
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