Part1 and part 2

I was born in the shadows
where the gallows exist,
And I rose from the ashes
Of the fiery pits.
I have walked on the bones
of the ones I have killed, 
And I drank from their blood
until my lust was filled.
I became such a a legend
I know you know my name,
straight from hell here to tell
you that I'm back again.
And I bring with me pain
like this world's never known,
in the end you will bend on
your knees at my throne .
So run little vermin run fast
and run far,
because I am going to find you
wherever you are.
I will rip you to pieces and laugh
as you die,
with your hands pressed together
looking up at the sky.
You will waste your last breathe
crying out in despair,
but no-one will answer
because nobody's there.
Part 2
Silence deceiver for I've heard
enough,
i won't let you harm the ones
that I love.
I created the world's and the 
heavens above,
and I have always been
because I always was.
I opened the gates and gave
you the key,
but you chose your fate
by betraying me.
Make no mistake Mephistopheles,
when you fell from grace
you lost your wings.
I sent you down into the 
fiery pits,
deep under ground yet 
still you persist.
For thousands of years you
have searched for a way,
to deceive my believers and
lead them astray.
But those days are gone  for
now I have come,
to gather my herd with the 
word and my son.
And you will return to the hell
that you've earned,
and if you ever crawl out again,
I will send you away to a very 
dark place and you'll wish you
never had been.
With fetid disease roaches, maggots,
and fleas and you'll feed off each other
til death.
Now leave my sight lest I change
my mind and send you to that place
right now,
and rest assured if there be worse
I will find it somehow.
Then there was light from a 
million bright eyes as Gods
children knelt down before him,
this made God smile and he 
stared for a while,
then lowered his voice to 
begin.
Please rise my children so I 
may see ,
those who always kept faith in me.
You were never alone I was 
always with you,
and the pain that you've known
I felt it too.
You sent me you love and I
sent mine to you,
so you would stay strong and
help you get through.
Then God raised his hands for
all to see,
and he said welcome to Heaven
children please follow me.
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Date: 3/18/2025 9:11:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/15/2025 10:19:00 PM
interesting. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
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Date: 3/15/2025 11:41:00 AM
Ida, this didn't seem to relate to the theme per say, but I loved the interplay between God and the Devil. That Satan is a wily one. Nice placement
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Date: 3/14/2025 8:04:00 PM
Wow! Superb! Great first poem, Ida, welcome to PS
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