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Parking Ticket

Friends told a secret
Put the ticket on the shield
No more new tickets
I did not wait long
To realize the secret advice
When I got ticket
I did what they said
I left my car with ticket
Glad to know the trick
Dark when I came back
I saw the ticket gave birth
I do l!#*ve my friends

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/19/2012 8:44:00 AM
Hahaha this is silly, nice job!
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Junate Ersal
Date: 11/19/2012 9:10:00 AM
Actually,it was silly of me :)
Date: 11/18/2012 6:32:00 PM
hahaha, this is so funny!!!!
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Junate Ersal
Date: 11/18/2012 6:48:00 PM
Thanks. Lol
Date: 11/16/2012 10:40:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup! Hope you'll have great pleasure to share your poems here with us. (Give comments ... you get comments back .... more readers :) A good haiku Junate - and funny too :) Hope your weekend will be fine. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Junate Ersal
Date: 11/16/2012 10:54:00 AM
Thanks Anne. Wish you a great weekend.
Date: 11/15/2012 5:30:00 AM
A warm belated welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Junate. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Junate Ersal
Date: 11/16/2012 10:53:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Carol. Your words are pretty warm.
Date: 11/14/2012 6:43:00 AM
Lol, the ticket will give birth. Maybe lucky though sometimes. Keep hoping, Junate. Love ya, Toquyen
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Junate Ersal
Date: 11/14/2012 6:55:00 AM
Thank Toquyen. I don't think I'll try it again :)
Date: 11/14/2012 6:36:00 AM
Must try that some time! LOL Good one my friend!
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Junate Ersal
Date: 11/14/2012 6:55:00 AM
Thanks Jack.