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Park Sand

Winds
blow sand
through the park
and crystal grains
fly

Sand
castles
built by two
small hands forming 
it

Kids
laughing
and sliding
down big and small
slides

Sand
pails
with shovels
filling them with
sand 

Copyright © Dawn Gordon | Year Posted 2011

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Dawn Gordon Date: 4/15/2011 1:15:00 PM thanks dear..yeah good weekend planned..sibling sabbath saturday,,wrote a haiku while out playing... Login to Reply

Dawn Gordon Date: 4/15/2011 4:48:00 AM now when she walks around the corner of the street, the street the park is on LOL as she sees the little people in the park she is waving already saying " I'm here, my name is >>>>I am a girl! Hello I am here" ROFL Login to Reply

Dawn Gordon Date: 4/15/2011 4:48:00 AM she is waving down the street yelling " I am here now" LOL the tears of laughter..what a dollie... Login to Reply

Dawn Gordon Date: 4/15/2011 4:46:00 AM yeah it was gorgeous outside...cool breeze but nice..we are out several times a day...plus it helps with nightie night her newest line "going to see my people" oh goodness what a laugh..going to the park to see my people Login to Reply

Cyndi Macmillan Date: 4/14/2011 9:39:00 PM Truly lovely--I can see the two of you :-) It was nice today, wasn't it? I think this is my new favourite. Login to Reply

Dawn Gordon Date: 4/14/2011 5:37:00 PM oh thanks yeah...love the trips to the park...thanks alot...thought I would convert the lantern into more then one verse.. Login to Reply

Madeleine Mclaughlin Date: 4/14/2011 4:22:00 PM Really, really nice poem a lot of great images here. I can see myself in that park. Login to Reply