Dawn Gordon Poet Lanterne

Park Sand

Winds
blow sand
through the park
and crystal grains
fly

Sand
castles
built by two
small hands forming 
it

Kids
laughing
and sliding
down big and small
slides

Sand
pails
with shovels
filling them with
sand 

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Dawn Gordon April 15, 2011 at 1:15 PM thanks dear..yeah good weekend planned..sibling sabbath saturday,,wrote a haiku while out playing...

Dawn Gordon April 15, 2011 at 4:48 AM she is waving down the street yelling " I am here now" LOL the tears of laughter..what a dollie...

Dawn Gordon April 15, 2011 at 4:48 AM now when she walks around the corner of the street, the street the park is on LOL as she sees the little people in the park she is waving already saying " I'm here, my name is >>>>I am a girl! Hello I am here" ROFL

Dawn Gordon April 15, 2011 at 4:46 AM yeah it was gorgeous outside...cool breeze but nice..we are out several times a day...plus it helps with nightie night her newest line "going to see my people" oh goodness what a laugh..going to the park to see my people

Cyndi Macmillan April 14, 2011 at 9:39 PM Truly lovely--I can see the two of you :-) It was nice today, wasn't it? I think this is my new favourite.

Dawn Gordon April 14, 2011 at 5:37 PM oh thanks yeah...love the trips to the park...thanks alot...thought I would convert the lantern into more then one verse..

Madeleine Mclaughlin April 14, 2011 at 4:22 PM Really, really nice poem a lot of great images here. I can see myself in that park.