Park Sand

Winds blow sand through the park and crystal grains fly Sand castles built by two small hands forming it Kids laughing and sliding down big and small slides Sand pails with shovels filling them with sand

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Dawn Gordon

Date: 4/15/2011 1:15:00 PM

thanks dear..yeah good weekend planned..sibling sabbath saturday,,wrote a haiku while out playing...

Dawn Gordon

Date: 4/15/2011 4:48:00 AM

now when she walks around the corner of the street, the street the park is on LOL as she sees the little people in the park she is waving already saying " I'm here, my name is >>>>I am a girl! Hello I am here" ROFL

Dawn Gordon

Date: 4/15/2011 4:48:00 AM

she is waving down the street yelling " I am here now" LOL the tears of laughter..what a dollie...

Dawn Gordon

Date: 4/15/2011 4:46:00 AM

yeah it was gorgeous outside...cool breeze but nice..we are out several times a day...plus it helps with nightie night her newest line "going to see my people" oh goodness what a laugh..going to the park to see my people

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 4/14/2011 9:39:00 PM

Truly lovely--I can see the two of you :-) It was nice today, wasn't it? I think this is my new favourite.

Dawn Gordon

Date: 4/14/2011 5:37:00 PM

oh thanks yeah...love the trips to the park...thanks alot...thought I would convert the lantern into more then one verse..

Madeleine Mclaughlin

Date: 4/14/2011 4:22:00 PM

Really, really nice poem a lot of great images here. I can see myself in that park.