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Parisian Evening Hues

Written: June 22, 2023 A Brian Strand Premiere No 1225 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand ______________________________________________________________ In a diaphanous café amidst the Parisien city's light, Where lemon meringue waltz with dulcet delight, Laughter echoes, filling shadows with glee, A cerulean blue sky above sets dreams free. Strings strumming lavender notes tones, Mellifluous hues, a canorous concert unknown, Vibrant chords dancing upon the air, Susurrous secrets, elysian melodies so rare. Hints amorous in coral empyreal sheen, Zaftig's radiant smile, a mesmerizing scene, Eyes shimmering with secrets untold, A story of wistfulness waiting to unfold. In the City of Lights, where dreams arise, A summer's tale unfolds before our eyes, As the sun aurified the skies in hues of gold, And secrets of the heart elicit to unfold. Beneath the stars that twinkle and ignite, We dance to the rhythm of the Parisian night, Inhibitions lose, our souls set free, A taste of cynosure bliss, for you and me.
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Anaya Avatar
June 28, 2023 at 7:23 PM
Congratulations on your win,Lasaad! Simply dreamy, blithely spirited, and whimsicly delightful. Stunning painting to accompany.
Kauffman Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 11:43 AM
Lasaad, what an enchanting poetic rainbow of sounds, sights and tempting tastes all rolled into your delightful, "diaphanous" poem. Your lines are as light as a summer evening breeze. Spellbinding and delicious all at the same time my friend. Lovely writing! Always love your word pairings. Congratulations and blessings dear friend!
Volumes Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 6:23 AM
Such a beautiful Poem. Enchanting melody as the words undulate across the screen. SP this is brilliance. An amazing poem.
Narain Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 10:37 AM
Nice imagery for a beautiful city. Your choice of words is beyond my reach, even my concise dictionary. Très beau poème.
Lindley Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 7:02 AM
" Lights, knowledge and a heart that softly glows. Heavenly beauty cast, poetic verse. A brilliant mind that sends and truly shows. As if a gifted actor doth rehearse." Truly brilliant poetry, A jewel and a fav, .
Pandit Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 5:25 AM
Delightful sights from the city of lights--beautiful images throughout, my friend. Much enjoyed the joy and celebration you convey with a romantic touch.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 1:10 AM
La gay Paree. What a wonderful poem. Your choice of words is impeccable, your imagery is incomparable. Best poem today.
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