Parent's Dilemma

My teenage daughter
Should be shorter,
If water makes you shrink,
So many hours
Taking showers,
She's clearly turning pink.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Buck Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 12:41 PM
John: And all those with teenagers said: Amen. Nice job. My kind of poetry. oldbuck
Williams Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 6:20 PM
Hello Old Buck, Yes, teenagers & their showers, most houses now work off timers, perhaps might add a 2nd verse using that idea. Thanks for reading my poem. Kind regards----John
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