Parenting

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                                                      Quickly feed zip-zoom
                                           Babies in the trumpet shaped nest
                                                     Can't take time to rest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Knop Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 5:30 AM
Cute Haiku, Sara! This is the time now for baby birds!...Yes, Sara, whiskies have about 40% alcohol but it is so interesting to taste the differences as it depends on the fired malt (sometimes on peat) and the different water used..Have a great weekend...Gert
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April 29, 2010 at 10:18 PM
HAHAZ, I DNT GET TIRED OF miLeY! SHEZ MY LIL SIDEKICK,WHEN SHE CAN MOVE, SHE GONNA GET KRAZY FUNNY WIT MOMMY.LOL. .LIK MOTHER LIKE DAHTER.WIT OUT THE MISTAKES I MADE OF CORSE bUfFy
Tapley Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 9:09 PM
Yeah, I remember those days! Seems as if sometimes I did not have time to breathe. Lovely poem that said so much about being a parent. Excellent work!
Freeman Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 8:31 AM
This is also a cool take on the photo Sara. I have read that hummungbirds are always just minutes away from starvation. You captured this fact in your Haiku. In Can't take time to rest. Smile, Agape, Moses
Chachere Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 5:57 PM
thats cute. who would possibly want to rest in the presence of a cute baby.lol.everyone would as time passes that's for sure. -Always&Forever LYnette
Culverhouse Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 7:20 AM
enjoyed, we found one of our baby blue bird eggs destroyed in the yard. they are such pretty blue speckled eggs.
Dietrich Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 9:17 PM
Very nice, Sara. I wanted to research a bit about that bird so I could try out the haiku but I knew it would close before I could do that. I can tell that you probably already knew alot about hummingbirds! Luv, andrea
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April 26, 2010 at 12:26 PM
cute poem mom, hope you are feeling ok.
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April 26, 2010 at 10:52 AM
One can just imagine, enjoyed,..p.d.
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