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The photo is my niece and her new born 

Nine months I carried and waited for you to come into the world so I could hold you in my arms. I knew you were in my womb when my moods changed and certain smells made me nauseated sending me straight to the bathroom vomiting. Flavor for food had also changed craving strange foods and lots of ice. You would stretch, punch, kick, flip, and turn when you were old enough to move, even hiccupped once in awhile, your way of letting me know you were healthy growing in my womb. The day arrived; you decided to make your heartfelt appearance. The contractions started while I sat in the bathtub relaxing. The pain subsided for just a little while; five minutes later I knew I was in true labor. Your dad rushed us into the car and drove straight to the hospital. I was told it wasn't time, but you decided to proof the nurse wrong. Those memories long forgotten, the second I laid eyes on you at that moment all I desired was to stare with awe as you slept. I was intoxicated with your blissful scent, the feel of your soft skin, the wrinkled tiny feet and tiny hands, and charming smile. Eternal sunshine that was mind is still my whole joy in my life. Don't you ever forget you will always be the love of my heart. 10/14/2017

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Date: 11/6/2017 7:25:00 AM
Congrats Eve, a nice piece of work...
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Date: 10/25/2017 8:12:00 PM
Blessings and congrats for your well-deserved win, Eve - keep up the wonderful work, my friend! :-)
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Date: 10/21/2017 5:54:00 PM
Beautifully written, Eve. It brought back my own memories on what a special gift this time of life was. Congrats on your well-deserved placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/21/2017 10:00:00 AM
Sorry Eve! Dont know how I missed this! It is indeed a gift, just ask those who cant have children.. Beautiful mother and son journey.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/20/2017 10:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Eve.
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Date: 10/20/2017 5:37:00 PM
Hi Eve, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 2nd place win in the contest. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/16/2017 10:36:00 AM
Hi Eve, I can relate to your heartfelt poem very much. Becoming a mother was the best thing that has ever happened to me hands down. Excellent job. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/16/2017 11:13:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis, Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 10/15/2017 7:43:00 AM
A fav Eve. Put tears in my eyes thinking of my daughter Ashley.
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Date: 10/15/2017 1:22:00 PM
Thank you, Michael,,, they are so very special little innocent angels that God has blessed us with how Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 10/15/2017 7:10:00 AM
Eve, Excellent sharing , of a mother's heart! It make me appreciate my mother, more! The depth of such love leaves me in awe! My best to you, chuck
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/15/2017 12:32:00 PM
Thank you, Chuck, wait until your turn comes and your feelings will surpass this understanding of love.. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 10/15/2017 6:29:00 AM
Lovely recall of parental joy and affection--best for a win, Eve!
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/15/2017 12:30:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay, it has been 38 years from the last one, but still remember every second of their birth. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 10/14/2017 7:24:00 PM
I loved this poem, so sweet, and I bet your son loves this too! That photo is so cute too!
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/15/2017 12:29:00 PM
Thank you, Arthur, my sons are my life and grew up spoiled rotten. And now the grandchildren are following in the manner.. Hugs dear and very close friend...

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