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Written 27 August 2026

Placed Second in :  A Parent`s Love Poetry Contest of Matt Caliri

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Parental Love


A question sprouts from a soft voice ,
With small lips, himself to rejoice:
"Which one of us, my dearest  Dad,
 You love best, please tell, don't be sad."

“Dear son, my heart, a garden vast,
Where multiple memories last,
Each bud that bloomed, each sunbeam bright,
Holds an equal love and delight.

Your brother's laughter, bold and free,
Is a river rushing to me.
Your sister's silent serene gaze,
A gentle dawn in morning haze.

And you, my dear questioning soul,
Your spirit bright, you make me whole,
Your quick embrace, your probing mind,
A treasure rare that I could find.

To pick a bloom, from this garden,
Would dim the rest, of a sudden,
Each one a star, in my own sky,
That shines uniquely, reaching high.

There is no "more," no lesser part,
Within my brimming golden heart,
Each tiny hand, each whispered plea,
Is etched forever, part of me.

Your earnest eyes, a hopeful plea,
Seeking a truth you long to see,
But truth is woven, strong and true,
In every single one of you.

Son let me tell you, with all might,
My love for you is pure and bright.
As bright as sun, as deep as sea,
And each of you is loved by me.

No unequal favours or share,
Just boundless love, beyond compare,
An equal tide, it ebbs and flows,
Where every single blossom grows.

Your query stirs a tender sigh,
But know my love will never die,
It simply grows, a mighty tree,
Embracing all, eternally."
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September 6, 2026 at 2:28 AM
Krish, back with heartfelt congratulations on your contest podium win for this very well-crafted poem.
George Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 1:26 AM
Back to your poem dear friend to congratulate you on your great win in the contest👏
Caliri Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 5:22 PM
KG, congrats on placing 2nd place out of 33 entries! Loved the care you put into every description and the wonderful rhythm of the words. Brought me to tears.
George Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 2:54 AM
So wide and vast is parental love. It is bestowed on each child in equal measure and each child holds a place in the parent's heart. Love the whole poem, particularly the last stanza. All the best.
Guptar Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 4:11 AM
Thank you Valsa for appreciating the above poem and for your kind wishes. Each clild to a parent is a star illuminating the sky of the heart.
Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 2:00 AM
Sweet one. Parental love is maybe as close as we can ever get to God's love
Guptar Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 4:15 AM
Thank you dear poetess for appreciating the above poem. Parents` love for their children is as gracious as Lord`s grace.
Poet Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 3:38 AM
Krish, this is a lovely poem that captures the essence of a parent's love for their children beautifully. The imagery of a garden and the metaphors of nature, like rivers and stars, paint a vivid picture of love that's equal and everlasting. The poem uses straight language, making it easy to follow and understand. The emotional depth is impressive, and it feels heartfelt and genuine.
Guptar Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 4:21 AM
Thank you dear poet for your kind words that are so inspiring. Wishing you a blessed day.
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