Pardon Me

while i do think "mills"is in a fraction of a word dull,
i do however find it hilarious that people speak exclusively of adolesent love being brought on by a surge of chemicals. everything us humans do is by some surge or another of some chemicals,perhaps in adulthood we might find a way to remote control these surges.
but i hardly see that as something.
to top the whole thing off i feel Beth hurch,s vocals make the tune moon safari.
JOLLY HOCKY sticks to one and all, and ill have a stella please xx
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Agustin Avatar
January 22, 2026 at 5:01 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 31, 2016 at 9:06 PM
DEAN, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love -- SKAT --
Smith Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 6:17 AM
We're all one big bowl of chemical soup, so pour in more Stella and XX.
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