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Pardon From the Storm

Take my heart and carry me to where all dreams are born. Into loves arms, oh such a place that's always safe and warm. Away from such deceitful lairs where blackened virtues swarm. into a light where peace must shine and grants us pardon from a storm. High above the mountain tops or low as low can be. Makes no difference where we are a wondrous lyric calls to me. Singing of your splendor like a miracle performed. I'll stay with you to find the port that grants us pardon from a storm. POTD 03/03/2018
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Niknafs Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 10:35 PM
Hi dear Smith I am hafez niknafs Composer from Iran Your lyric are so Beautiful I want use of your lyric in my composition. Can i do? I am waiting for your happy reply I mention my email for better access [email protected] Warm regards
Bangalee Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 2:18 AM
superb and lovely loving poem; greatly I enjoyed
Smith Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 5:47 PM
Thank you Mahtab...
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 1:35 PM
Hello Charlie Smith, to me as I read this poem, i read it as romantic. Because he will stay with her to find the port. have a nice day my friend.
Smith Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 11:00 AM
Thank You Darlene...
Shaw Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 10:15 PM
This captivation of picture and verse Charlie second to none - a very beautiful and splendid piece . . .
Smith Avatar
May 2, 2020 at 2:20 PM
Thanks Indiana...
Gauthier Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 7:01 AM
Awesome poem, Charlie. Congrats on your most deserving POTD. A FAVE for me.
Smith Avatar
May 2, 2020 at 2:20 PM
Thank You Line...
Staton Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 9:37 PM
Beautiful poem. Love the accompanying picture.
Smith Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 10:19 AM
Thank you Valerie...
Bradfield Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 10:20 AM
I loved this lyric! Well done...
Smith Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 10:28 AM
Thanks Larry...
Juman Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 5:13 AM
Wonderful my brother
Smith Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 11:49 AM
Thank you Al...
Roper Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 11:38 PM
This is so beautiful, Charlie
Smith Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 11:50 AM
Thank you Eve...
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 9:12 PM
wow, how did I ever miss this one?? It's so good, Charlie and I see it got a POTD. BIG congrats for that.
Smith Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 9:37 AM
Thanks Andrea...
George   Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 7:55 AM
This goes to my list of favorite poem, Charlie. Very beautiful, deep meaning and so heart felt by me. Sincerely, Elaine
Smith Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 1:51 PM
Thank you Elaine...
Jain Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 10:37 AM
It was a sheer joy to review your poem. Regards. Great work of poetry.Emoting emotion nicely done. Beauty of a poem means use of rhetorical devices. Your poem is abound with it.
Smith Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 1:51 PM
Thank you Sanket...
Devonshire Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 5:07 PM
I love this poem, Charlie, especially the way it reminds us that having someone to share the ups and downs of life is like a "port in the storm." Ah, how sweet it was to feel this way! (And the painting above the poem is magically linked to it. So beautiful!)
Smith Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 1:50 PM
Thank you Carolyn..
Duet Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 10:10 PM
This is so beautiful, Charlie. Love it and a belated congratulations on POTD.
Smith Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 10:28 AM
Thank you Carole...
Callus Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 1:05 PM
Lyrical, romantic and beautiful, Charlie. Belayed congrats on POTD. Regards // paul
Smith Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 1:50 PM
Thank you Paul.
Van Zant Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 12:18 AM
Beautifully written.
Smith Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 10:03 AM
Thank you Sheila...
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 11:59 PM
'No difference where we are"" . So true if content in presence of one we are with! You have a tender spirit...enjoy reading old entries. bbn
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 11:59 PM
'No difference where we are"" . So true if content in presence of one we are with! You have a tender spirit...enjoy reading old entries. bbn
Smith Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 10:03 AM
Thank you Barbara...
O.J. Hunt Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 7:39 AM
Excellent.... A fave Charlie;-)
Smith Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 9:34 AM
Thank you Keith...
Daniel Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 9:19 AM
Beautiful poem, Charlie, congratulations on POTD:)
Smith Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 10:38 AM
Thank you Jo...
Gupta Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 6:41 AM
this is beautiful indeed ... the very opening two lines are enchanting ... love it, Charlie ...
Smith Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 3:03 PM
Thank you Probir...
Vaso Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 10:48 PM
I haven't been around as much, but this my friend is true poetry, loved this one!
Smith Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 3:03 PM
Thank you Arthur...
Shea Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 8:28 PM
Wonderful write..Very heart lifting..Thank you so much for sharing.. Derena(Harriet)
Smith Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 10:17 PM
Thank you Derena...
Bocsa Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 2:31 PM
Wonderful poetry, image and amazing flow of imagery. It is a rewarding experience to re-discover a poet for all seasons.
Smith Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 10:16 PM
Thank you Ovidiu...
Acrich Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 8:45 AM
The first say I am wishing to say is the pic is awesome, You're a true poet I can't write like this i can only tell stories in rhyme very impresive on to your next one
Smith Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 11:15 AM
Thanks Marc...
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