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Parched Leaves

Parchment of the grove, Soft wind caresses the trees: Frail embellishment.

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Date: 9/4/2009 12:04:00 PM

I really like the second line--gives one a sense of peace. Creative imagery words well. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen

James Fraser

Date: 9/4/2009 11:54:00 AM

Lovely Haiku, another super write>>James

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/4/2009 8:18:00 AM

The peace and tranquil feel of this one is wonderful, Raul! love it! ....my admiration! ~Carrie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 9/4/2009 6:20:00 AM

Another number one stunner from you brother.

Katherine Stella

Date: 9/4/2009 5:38:00 AM

beautiful piece of art you paint in minds eye also I changed my entry to your contest its now called standing tall and looking good thanks for sharign keep up the wonderful writing

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/4/2009 1:46:00 AM

charming, light, dreamy...wake UP Raul...wake my sleeping giant! find your ROAR!!!! Light & Love ;)