Parched Leaves

Parchment of the grove,
Soft wind caresses the trees:
Frail embellishment.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 4, 2009 at 12:04 PM
I really like the second line--gives one a sense of peace. Creative imagery words well. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
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September 4, 2009 at 11:54 AM
Lovely Haiku, another super write>>James
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September 4, 2009 at 8:18 AM
The peace and tranquil feel of this one is wonderful, Raul! love it! ....my admiration! ~Carrie
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September 4, 2009 at 6:20 AM
Another number one stunner from you brother.
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September 4, 2009 at 5:38 AM
beautiful piece of art you paint in minds eye also I changed my entry to your contest its now called standing tall and looking good thanks for sharign keep up the wonderful writing
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September 4, 2009 at 1:46 AM
charming, light, dreamy...wake UP Raul...wake my sleeping giant! find your ROAR!!!! Light & Love ;)
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