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Paratrooper's Gracious Descent—mother Earth Below

It was the day I wanted the most
Yet dreaded as the worst,
Seeing the jumpmaster’s eyes
Way up there in the sky,
Waiting for the scream
“This is a paratroopers’ dream
Stand in the door—lean and mean!”
C130 paratrooper’s Jet, 1500 feet above earth
M16 Weapon by my side, ready to hit the dirt 

Knees bent as a dog’s leg on the ledge
Crackling nerves on screeching edge
Cotton dried mouth like a Sahara’s wedge
Soldier before me threw up his lunch
Stomach flipping—fear gripping  
Paratrooper’s static lines scraping, moving
Shinny brand new paratrooper’s boots 
Shivering to a shuffling groove
Trembling to its new roots

Cold palms slippery from sweating
Camouflaged face twitching like electric shocking
Eyes like a road map dredged with red
Boots shuffling towards the elliptical edge
Heard the jumpmaster’s words 
“Go, go, go—jump soldier!”
I felt like a lonely hanging leaf 
Growing from the side of a cliff
Just dangling in the breeze
Like a trapeze with distance in between

The moment of truth arrived
Saw the green paratrooper’s light
Heard the Jumpmaster’s voice—“Go!”
Cannonball leap into the rushing breeze 
Wings of angels—still praying all the more
One thousand…two…three…four…
Parachute opened above—“Puff!”
Then I knew from the Lord
As I descended safely below
I am still His beloved!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Grisetti Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 7:46 PM
First, thank you foe serving. Second, this is a great description of a jump. i have wanted to try and never had the opportunity. Hope you are still writing.
Stella Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 9:26 AM
My brother this should be in a book such imagery you almost had me losing my lunch and this is why my feet was planted firmly on a pedal in a 5 ton truck lol great write my friend and congrats on being featuired are you done with music school yet cause my next song is going to be rap lol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 3:13 PM
Congrats Joseph on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. an excellent choice to share with us all.. with luv..
Blauw Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 2:21 AM
Really enjoyed reading this poem. Love the way you painted the picture with your words. Congrats on being featured this week.
Brown Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 6:21 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Joseph. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 2, 2010 at 8:41 PM
Congrats Joseph on your featured poem this week on the Soup... an excellent choice to share with us all..with luv..
George   Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 2:56 AM
Wow! Wht a vivid heart thumping write, Joseph. Congratulations on your win in John's contest. Love Lainie
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 7:01 AM
Congratulations Joseph on your well deserved win in John Heck's contest "Edge". Love, Carol
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July 18, 2010 at 10:07 AM
What an excellent poem, dear Joseph. You took me with you in your poem and made me experience the paratrooper from beginning to end . Dina
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 7:33 PM
Joseph, Congratulations! You expressed the heart freezing moments with amazing imagery and emotion. A true testament of faith. Excellent!
Brumley Avatar
July 16, 2010 at 7:44 PM
That static line is a great comfort huh Joseph? Congrats on your win in the contest with this memorable event.
Sweetheart Avatar
July 16, 2010 at 2:51 PM
Congrats Joseph on your winning poem in John's Edge contest with this marvelous creation.. enjoy your victory with blessings on top.. with luv..
Amah Avatar
July 16, 2010 at 2:30 PM
Joe, congras! keep the pen a-flowing! Canny
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June 30, 2010 at 7:10 PM
did you jump out of the plane, yourself? I would die! made my stomach go--flipity gurgley!
Sweetheart Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 12:21 PM
Well if this is not a testament to trusting God ..I don't know what is Joseph.. so inspirational and well written to deliver the premise of the poem.. so enjoyed your creative write and thankxxx for your special comments on my writings this week.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation...still
Hales Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 7:26 AM
Wow thats description at its best ... sarah x
Slaughter Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 4:22 PM
Very good write! Intense! I don't think I could jump from a plane, I am very afraid of heights, and I would feint before I could even open my parachute...lol
R Avatar
June 27, 2010 at 5:36 AM
Exciting write here,Joseph...full of action and kinda scary...my adrenaline is way up now...Great one!;) Hugs, Emily
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June 27, 2010 at 12:20 AM
so much action, and a very spectacular experience. the great creativity in your words to make it the true blast it is, scary! but a heck of a fall. i think i would go for it.(: awesome detail, Joseph. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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June 26, 2010 at 12:16 PM
Ow my,I felt so much there in action. .I felt just a pinch of the fear,excitement,prayer,I felt a bit of you and realised how brave you must be. .tnks for this roller coaster journey. .Its when we are helpless that we feel so loved by God. .There must have been an angel caring just for you!I'm in love with your writes.bravo!Celene!
Stella Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 7:25 AM
outstanding write my brother your imagery was non than perfection this should belong in a book for army training this even made me grin hu-raaaaaaaaaa lol hugs Joe keep on jumping
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June 25, 2010 at 2:22 PM
Breathtaking description of one who is about to take his first leap...and a leap of faith it proves to be in the end. I always wanted to go skydiving, but having read this, perhaps I should remain earthbound. Riveting poem, Joseph! Love, Carolyn
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June 25, 2010 at 2:17 PM
Wow, you took my mind away with this one, hmm??? I am enjoying how all your poetry is different in every way. Mine just sticks to the same me. You have a very interesting way of using your imagination,,,,,sure feels real,.Nicely done once again,..Sidney LeeAnn
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June 25, 2010 at 12:36 PM
I am shaking in my shoes as I am typing this just from reading it..You are a brave heart and I am so glad that God was there in person and your guardian angel holding you under his wings...Sara
Brown Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 12:29 PM
I am enjoying reading the diverse poetry presented here today. I wish you a weekend of good health, love, and inspiration. The best to you always in your endeavors Joseph. Love, Carol
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