Paratrooper

nerves fiddle-string taut
heavy pack upon his back
free fall into fray
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 14, 2010 at 4:17 PM
You have quite a talent for haikus, Patricia! And I really enjoyed the alliteration in the last line. Nice work! Love, Carolyn
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