Paranoia

The lights flicker
As the candle flame
As it grows weaker
And grows more dim
The howls are steadier
The feeling of grim
Drip drop
The sound of blood
I try to hold my breathe
That's too much
The stench
Too much death
Voices wailing
Of pain
And of agony
We're alone
But nothing is sure
As long as they exist
I'll live
Continuing my journey
With blades side by side
They'll tremble before me
Rise blood hunter


Pls. Do Comment after reading.
Pls....
Pretty Pls...
T_T

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Date: 6/14/2013 12:05:00 AM
Pretty morbid!! But deliciously so! that is funny how you say: do comment after reading. It goes along with the paranoid title!!!
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Date: 5/29/2013 11:42:00 PM
nicely done, glad you like my Kaleidoscope , you might like my Grim Reaper. I'm going to have to read more from you ;} I've started reading Stephen Kings "under the Dome" now I see they've made a series ;}
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Date: 5/22/2013 3:39:00 AM
Wow :) Awesome descriptions. felt like i was in a horror movie for a moment. :)
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Date: 5/22/2013 3:42:00 AM
Thanks for commenting. Its just an epilogue though. im gonna write something more about it.
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