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where does the line we draw
                     begin
is it somewhere behind
                     or before;
is it between us
 lost in the tangle we step
inordinate
to be 
within the line?

what a jagged jig we jag
  among a potpourri 
       that of
tin cans and broken branches.
 we kick to clear
our way
 sometimes skimming
 sometimes skipping.

lost and crazy
it seems

crossover, crossover, crossover

because we draw the line.

how 'bout a hyphen?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/6/2008 12:53:00 PM
The format enhances the poem for a creative experience. Love the closing question. I like the active nature of this piece. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. I see you haven't been here in awhile. I hope you return. If you do, please let me know so that I can read your new posts. Best wishes. Karen
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