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where does the line we draw begin is it somewhere behind or before; is it between us lost in the tangle we step inordinate to be within the line? what a jagged jig we jag among a potpourri that of tin cans and broken branches. we kick to clear our way sometimes skimming sometimes skipping. lost and crazy it seems crossover, crossover, crossover because we draw the line. how 'bout a hyphen?

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Date: 10/6/2008 12:53:00 PM
The format enhances the poem for a creative experience. Love the closing question. I like the active nature of this piece. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. I see you haven't been here in awhile. I hope you return. If you do, please let me know so that I can read your new posts. Best wishes. Karen
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