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Paralysis

In a small room where the shadows grew large I was thinking about my escape Like a fisherman’s catch Cast back into the greatest lake of Michigan The room grew dim, and then glowed red And cast me off into a deep sleep Mind open, body stuck, Climbing the deck of a boat- Escape As my body froze and I was fastened To the cold relentless metal And I opened my eyes I never felt the tender brush of sleep again

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Date: 5/30/2025 2:23:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 5/26/2025 8:40:00 AM
Great first poem
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Date: 5/26/2025 5:21:00 AM
Well, this is certainly nightmarish. You've really created a mood here Natalie. Welcome to PS!
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