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we walk not talk ego stalking we balk at truth 02-October-2022

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Becky Forbes

Date: 10/1/2022 7:25:00 PM

Love it "ego stalking" perfect words!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/2/2022 1:39:00 AM

Thank you, Becky

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/1/2022 4:36:00 PM

My friend, this is a true and retrospective thought, and the form is intriguing as well.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/2/2022 1:39:00 AM

Yes, a compact but challenging form

Bill Baker

Date: 10/1/2022 4:17:00 PM

Haven't seen this form before, my friend, but I like it. Thanks for sharing, Bill

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/2/2022 1:39:00 AM

I find these difficult to write …

Jeff Kyser

Date: 10/1/2022 3:28:00 PM

A nice than-bauk None to balk at Or block out soon

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/2/2022 1:38:00 AM

Thanks Jeff