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crisscrossing parallel universes by some freak of nature teeter tottering tumbling to one side then to the other in one world her home Julia is unbearably lonely a devastated grieving widow inconsolable since her tragic loss one day she crosses over to the other side walking into a parallel world where all is the same but for the accident and her marriage never cut short like a curious puzzle she puts pieces together understanding that in this new world she is squandering her treasure taking for granted the man of her life throwing away in one world the same prize desperately grieved in the other how will she balance the two worlds ~ AP: Honorable Mention 2025 Posted on December 11, 2024 (inspired by 1988 movie 'Julia and Julia' starring Kathleen Turner)

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Date: 12/28/2024 2:44:00 AM
The profound concept of parellel universe. Interesting story
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/28/2024 12:31:00 PM
Yes indeed, fascinating ~
Date: 12/27/2024 9:19:00 AM
That movie sounds so familiar to me. I love movies on parallel universes. Well done, Line
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Date: 12/28/2024 12:30:00 PM
You've probably seen it ~ worth revisiting ~ happy new year, Andrea !
Date: 12/24/2024 4:09:00 AM
Merry Christmas and a happy new year Line God bless.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/26/2024 7:27:00 PM
Thank you very much, John. All the best to you in 2025 !
Date: 12/14/2024 5:26:00 PM
A interesting read Line. Physicists theorise that parallel universes exist and that there maybe other versions of ourselves living on parallel worlds. That could explain Deja Vu. Cheers~Anne :-)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/15/2024 4:49:00 PM
fascinating ~
Date: 12/13/2024 6:03:00 AM
Hi line,that is a quandary,enjoyed reading your poem. xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/13/2024 3:37:00 PM
Thanks, John, much appreciated ~
Date: 12/12/2024 8:11:00 PM
Intriguing puzzle, alright. ~ Tite R. Oops
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/13/2024 3:36:00 PM
Hello Gershon ~ thanks for the visit

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