Parallel Love

From afar I watch the sun 
That's setting in your eyes..
Shades of green melt into tangerine..
But I'm just a different hue 
From violet to pink and blue
We may never be intertwined..
For we are parallel dimensions 
Of the mind
But if I may say 
The vibrance in your eyes 
Is beautifully enchanting..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Pratap Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 11:40 PM
TOUCHING
Kelley Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 12:35 AM
Thank you for reading!
Andresen Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 4:37 AM
- Karissa, a very lovely poem ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Kelley Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 10:45 PM
Thank you! Xoxo
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