Parallax

Astonished seeing wisdom in one so young,
we hastened to correct parallax of sight,
for did not this soul slowly climb rung by rung,
the ladder of wisdom, now at zenith height?

Our fault line is that we look at outer form,
whilst the soul within has faced many a storm,
life after life, reborn again and again,
revealing a gem that is now free from stain.
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Greenhough Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 5:26 PM
Many lives that eventually find happiness. I like the courage of this theme.
Seeker Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 7:26 PM
Yes, sometimes we see youngsters who are spiritually evolved and wise beyond their years, well versed in the scriptures and radiating an effulgent aura of live and light. Obviously a past life carryover.
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