Paradox

Winters chilling freeze
Static on a frozen breeze
And trees walk naked
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
May 4, 2009 at 7:16 PM
Very Nice! Congratulations for your honorable mention in Abe's Haiku Season's contest. Love, Dane
Augustus Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 1:57 PM
Nice! I really like this. I had to read it just a few times to get it; but, I think I was just distracted because I had the television on at the same time. The last line really brings it together. Congratulations on your honorable mention in the Haiku Seasons contest.
Gorelick Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 6:55 AM
Congrats on having this wonder poem recognized. I love it...the last line is so perfect. Bg
Strand Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 12:16 AM
Congrats on your success in Abe's contest David.Rgds Brian
Moreno Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 12:06 AM
MAzing imagery, congrats on your HM...Raul
Townsend Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 11:37 PM
Congratulations on the Honorable Mention in the contest. Smiles from Lolita
P. Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 2:51 AM
so cute and chilly ... my friend! ~ Arany
Rouhana Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 10:27 PM
I love poetry short and easy. You can picture 3 months period in 3 wonderful lines. Never witnessed winter in my country, it must be something! Great write. God Bless you too :), Yara.
Winter Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 2:47 PM
Makes me shiver and i love Winter. Excellent haiku! Love, Shar
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