Paradox

Winters chilling freeze Static on a frozen breeze And trees walk naked

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/4/2009 7:16:00 PM

Very Nice! Congratulations for your honorable mention in Abe's Haiku Season's contest. Love, Dane

Brandee Augustus

Date: 5/1/2009 1:57:00 PM

Nice! I really like this. I had to read it just a few times to get it; but, I think I was just distracted because I had the television on at the same time. The last line really brings it together. Congratulations on your honorable mention in the Haiku Seasons contest.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/1/2009 6:55:00 AM

Congrats on having this wonder poem recognized. I love it...the last line is so perfect. Bg

Brian Strand

Date: 5/1/2009 12:16:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Abe's contest David.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/1/2009 12:06:00 AM

MAzing imagery, congrats on your HM...Raul

Lena Townsend

Date: 4/30/2009 11:37:00 PM

Congratulations on the Honorable Mention in the contest. Smiles from Lolita

Arany P.

Date: 4/18/2009 2:51:00 AM

so cute and chilly ... my friend! ~ Arany

Yara Rouhana

Date: 4/17/2009 10:27:00 PM

I love poetry short and easy. You can picture 3 months period in 3 wonderful lines. Never witnessed winter in my country, it must be something! Great write. God Bless you too :), Yara.

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/17/2009 2:47:00 PM

Makes me shiver and i love Winter. Excellent haiku! Love, Shar